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within the light, i see the dark,
within the dark, i see the fire,
within the fire, i see my death.
i feel the flames dance upon my skin,
leaving a faint scent of roses behind,
it does not burn,
instead leaves a mark of intricate peacocks, peonies, and hibiscuses.
it does not come off,
my skin is permanently marked.
i look up into your eyes,
asking why, why would you do this to me?
your visual caress breaks through the icy
glare that showed me death.
i close my eyes,
falling back unto the rain covered grass.
thunder and lightning fight over me,
who loves me best.
i cannot choose which path to take,
into the darkened flames,
or into the warm, welcoming light.
i choose the flames,
meeting you at death's door.
thunder says go on,
lightning says that in choosing death,
i have no courage or strength.
you say nothing to influence me,
you just stand there with the animal look of hunger.
your mind is barricaded,
like a corralled stallion,
begging to be free.
my nostrils flare at the love scents in the air,
heartsease, rose petals, chamomile, and rosemary,
bone of the earth, yemonja root, lodestone, raw amber,
and rose quartz in the shape of a heart.
fire now surrounds me.
fear taking over all other senses,
until i see you coming through the flames.
you reach out your hand,
the fire fading swiftly.
i stay kneeling on the grass,
though my hand reaches out to take yours.
our fingers barely touch,
lightning fills my body,
my mind conversing with yours.
you collapse with your arms around me.
no more am i lost,
but found by you,
my soulmate   
this is by far, the longest poem i have ever written. i hope u all like it as much as i do
this is the link for the group, alluring photos
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pebblesdork Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
By a photo, I meant the photo that is featured in the group xD
Which is the one of the daisies.
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Brilliant-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011  Student Writer
ohh, k, let me see if i can find it
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:iconpebblesdork:
pebblesdork Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2011
Not hard to miss xD
The donation pool is on my page; on the top right hand corner, over my ID photo. And my Journal is under my ID.
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Brilliant-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Student Writer
ok, i went there, and read the journal, what else
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pebblesdork Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
Donate! :D
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Brilliant-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2011  Student Writer
k
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pebblesdork Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
Make sure to add the photo, and a link to the group :]
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rubies3 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
i feel the flames dance upon my skin,
leaving a faint scent of roses behind,
it does not burn,
instead leaves a mark of intricate peacocks, peonies, and hibiscuses.
it does not come off,

wow this is an awesome mental image and its so unique and expressive...its my favorite part.

my nostrils flare at the love scents in the air,
heartsease, rose petals, chamomile, and rosemary,
bone of the earth, yemonja root, lodestone, raw amber,
and rose quartz in the shape of a heart.

my second favorite.
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Brilliant-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Student Writer
thank u, i try to be expressive
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King1976Bob Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
I actually think that's your best one :)
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